...do wrong perceptions mean they're false?

...what if i see the sun


as a golden dot?


and the clouds shroud the skies


choking the neck... breathless





what if i hear the waves crying


...and not roaring?


would i drown


trying to calm the sea?


what if i feel sorrow


in the eyes of a storm


would it be wrong to assume


that the sun's gonna die soon?


what if i see society...


as a desperate act


to control chaos...


what if i sense betrayal


in every bullet...


what if i hear lies


in every sweet kiss...


what if i'm wrong...





....does that make me false?...do wrong perceptions mean they're false?
Very good....walls of invisibility are everywhere, covering realities.





Looking behind the walls, is a must....do wrong perceptions mean they're false?
No. It doesn't make it false. Each of us perceives the world in his/her own way. And it is not wrong to have Extra-Sensory Perception. And it is great to be able to express your view of this world in such high-sense of poetry.


Very good read! Very different!
No Mek. It doesn't make you false. It makes you human. A living, breathing individual capable of receiving information and drawing conclusions as you see them...it makes you perceptive.
Wow! I'd say, You're for real! Yours is the first poem in a long time that I've read that I've really identified with, and if you have that kind of insight, you have to be for real, and NOT false. Great job!
I like what you see in things and the way you share them, that makes you neither right or wrong, just one of us. (A better writer than others I have seen.)





No, you are not false. Good write.
It is our privilage to question and ask, ';What if...? '; I think it makes us feel alive and not too complacent, don't you ?





...and as always, a remarkable write
what if i hear a knock on the door, is it someone out to get me? am i wrong?


they are not false if you think that way.
What a person sees cannot be false. It is their truth, the way they perceive life to be.





Another thought provoking poem Mek.
If your perceptions are always wrong, then yes. Somehow I do not think that is the case.
Poets perceive reality in different ways. Poetry is creation. You are a poet.
its all about perception


we all manifest our own realities


=)